ok who's ready to battle. we gotta keep it clean this time so it don't get deleted.
15 lines tops. we can dis eachother. go as personal as you want, just don't take anything personal ya know? whoever goes first is gonna be against me. so goodluck. single elimination until someone becomes champ.
GOOD LUCK!!! ************************************************************** 06-13-03, 09:05 AM clarebear Ok Ron, I'm game! I don't listen to rap but I've read a few Dr. Suess books in my time. LOL I'll go for it! Where do I start? Cool
06-13-03, 10:13 AM clarebear Seattle Ron don’t dis me cause I ain’t got back and I don’t like rap I’m a bear from Detroit that’s where I stay (yo’ baby whatch you need) I see it every day You think you see no hope in Washington State You wanna compare the murder rate? Rappers spew the lines but they don’t walk the walk I’ve seen too many outlines drawn in chalk We got crackheads and churches on every corner (no hope) I’m fixin to tell you this Ron, 8 mile is a joke It’s the county line FOOL! A bumpy road with potholes, strip bars and liquor stores. (don't be scared Ronnie) It ain’t no hood! You watch a damn movie and think it’s the hood! Get real! Go to Dexter and Davidson where the cops won’t go. Don’t bother with 9-11.. your dead! (no joke)
(rap song comes complete with spitting and arms moving side to side with open hand) Big Grin
06-13-03, 12:52 PM SeattleRon clarebear how dare ya step to the master, poppin off like a pimple to me??? thats a freakin disaster, what? can't take the pain don't complain, i'ma get ya so mad we be seeing yo veins, wanna talk about hoods, streets and blocks, best grab yo glock, when you roll through my hood don't even stop, the cops just as crooked, don't get stupid, it won't even matter what crew you go with, you did a'ight though gotta give ya credit, clare just got told hey ya got a bed, don't wet it!!!!!
06-13-03, 01:03 PM SeattleRon alright Party Animal it's on....
look at this fool tryin to challenge me, thinkin he can beat me, thats insanity, off the walls completely, the day ya try to defeat me, you'll be dead completely, don't even ask why, this fool gonna be smothered and fried, do or die, SeattleRon leavin tears in his stupid eyes, PartyAnimal can't believe ya wanted a piece, gonna die natural rest in peace you deceased, i'm bout to close you a fool now check it, SeattleRon got yo head disconected by a lynched hung necklace, when PartyAnimal flows everyone freakin leaves, only time he should be rappin is on christmas eve..........
06-13-03, 01:14 PM clarebear Who is gonna be the judge?
P.S. Party Animal is a girl Big Grin
06-13-03, 01:30 PM DorianGreyed Step back, boy. The girl B best.
06-13-03, 03:04 PM jusork Ooo looks tough. I'll try at a critique. 1 = low, 5 = high
Ron: Rhymes- 3 Flow- 4 Overall creativity- 3, credit and wet it was a good one but I recognize that pimple line Structure- 3
I think it's pretty close to tell and my numbers add up to be equal. Maybe a part 2?
06-13-03, 03:14 PM clarebear Nope, this is the only one I'm posting. Razz 06-13-03, 04:05 PM Georgia85 YO YO...I think the BEAR is Ah-Ight! She may be white but she's got it going on! My vote goes for CLARE Big Grin
Sorry Ron...this is second nature to you so I know you're good - but Clare did a great job for someone who has never "rapped" anything other than Christmas packages!
06-13-03, 04:11 PM Georgia85 I'm sorry...I just can't resist....so ya'll humor me (has nothing to do with this game - just have to let it out)
"Well I'm rich in black so ya better stand back you might get motion sickness or a heart attack! I can really rock 'em Put the swellin' in your pocket Make your eyeballs drop right outta their socket! I'm rough. I'm tough. I'm woman enuf... get ready, I'm gonna do my stuff! I take it, I can shake it, I can cook it, I can bake it. If I don't have a recipe I'll fake it! I'm a volcano that's ready to blow Look out y'all cuz here I go!"
06-14-03, 02:38 AM SeattleRon damn that was good georgia. didn't know ya had it in ya!
06-14-03, 02:43 AM SeattleRon clarebear, that was great! didn't know you had it in ya! ever thought about making a rap album? 06-14-03, 08:57 AM
Ritzmar Excellent. the three of you!!! Jusork, your judging will do for me... Big Grin
06-14-03, 02:04 PM clarebear Ron
I have listened to a few Too Short and NWA records in my time.
P.S. Shhh.. don't tell anyone. I got a rep to protect. Big Grin
06-14-03, 04:06 PM PartyAnimal sorry this is a little late Ron but here i go:
ya think your it! ya don't really know, your the only tramp around here, ya know! but i ain't gonna go harsh on yuz, coz i thinks i tight to pick on little trogs like you! listen to this guy, he thinks he's top of the notch! an i feel like im gonna kick him in the frickin crotch! but like said, i don't go that low, i'm not gonna stoop down to YOUR sick level! ya think your killer! but mommy would say yo were a de-formed gorilla! what's da matter? had enough, puff? just go back home before yo head get crushed!
[This message was edited by the future famous rapper on 06-14-03 at 04:19 PM.]
[This message was edited by PartyAnimal on 06-14-03 at 04:31 PM.]
06-14-03, 04:30 PM PartyAnimal did i win?
06-14-03, 04:38 PM clarebear Georgia's was good! Ok.. so I'm out of the contest. Thanks for letting me play. Smile
Party Animal... I think it is gonna be you against Ron !
* Clarebear shakes hands (home'e style with everyone who participated. Good game! Big Grin )
06-14-03, 07:36 PM puppyblues Wow, they were all pretty good, I'm impressed! Jusork's the judge, but I gotta go with my favorite little party animal on this one, she did GREAT! Smile
06-14-03, 08:47 PM jusork Clare and Ron's is way too close to judge and I hate hard decisions. Unless someone else wants to, I'll just let it be a draw.
Ooo, nice job Georgia.
Not bad Partyanimal. I think you lacked a little overall but it was mostly Ron's extra creativity that ultimately got you "smothered and fried". Keep at it though, you've got potential.
[This message was edited by jusork on 06-14-03 at 08:56 PM.]
06-15-03, 02:01 AM PartyAnimal lets try this again.....
oh well. at least i gave it a go. 06-15-03, 04:16 AM samantha I HATE RAP but you guys were just great! All four of you party animla, ron and gerogia and clare!!! Great job!! NOW RAP ON Big Grin
06-15-03, 04:01 PM PartyAnimal rap on!?!? no way!! im retiring from being a little rapper. too hard, (so i can't be bothered)! Roll Eyes
06-16-03, 07:01 PM puppyblues LOL my favorite little party animal! You still had my vote though Smile
06-17-03, 09:42 AM clarebear Hey I bailed out first. Does that mean Ron wins by default? Wink
06-22-03, 08:24 AM SeattleRon alrighty you guys you're all the judges..
ClareBare VS SeattleRon
for the championship.....
nothing personal it's all in fun.....
GOODLUCK....
06-22-03, 08:32 AM SeattleRon lol, hell yea I'ma laugh out loud, rippin on bear is what i'm all about, beeyotch what the hell ya thinkin? must be smokin on sherm fool cause I know ya ain't drinkin, tryin to dump on the R.O. mo'F'n N, matchin crap wit me sucka it's gonna be the end, I'ma bury yo ass like I"ma bury yo motha, six feet deep under in the grass alll covered, ya stupid heifer, pimp you out like a lady of the nite, SeattleRon on the mic spittin rhymes so damn tight, whats up, thought u was tough, what you done had enough, damn fool I ain't even been tough, on ya fool I'ma put it down, pitchin **** so quick like Roger Clemens from the pitchers mound, goin ahead and puttin ya away fool get outta my town gettin paid all day, It's SeattleRon fool from the Puget Sound, catchin money any way, cause ya know I"m down, Rappin against this fool is easy it's no sweat, off Casino road tough as hell you can bet ain't never sleazy
[This message was edited by SeattleRon on 06-22-03 at 08:42 AM.]
[This message was edited by Ritzmar on 06-22-03 at 11:13 AM.]
06-23-03, 02:42 PM clarebear I told you you won Ron!
That was my last one. Sorry. Big Grin
06-26-03, 08:12 AM SeattleRon aw man clarebear. i guess that last one was un necessary. great job clare! thanks to all you guys for playing.
06-26-03, 12:39 PM Kendor Nothing personal Ron, but the phrases below are typical of rap, and are exactly the reasons that myself, and many others, cannot stomach the crap. BTW, is there a difference between 'rap' and 'hip-hop'?
“best grab yo glock” “you'll be dead completely” “this fool gonna be smothered and fried” “gonna die natural rest in peace you deceased” “by a lynched hung necklace” “I'ma bury yo ass like I"ma bury yo motha” "six feet deep under in the grass alll covered”
Try a rhyming competition with no references to guns, death, drugs, or the 'hood'.
06-26-03, 03:38 PM jusork
quote:Originally posted by Kendor: BTW, is there a difference between 'rap' and 'hip-hop'?
Hip-hop basically is the culture which mainly includes turntablism, breakdancing, beatboxing, graffiti art, and...rapping. Hip-hop music usually includes those themes and rapping is apart of hip-hop which has branched off on it's own to be just rapping.
07-06-03, 05:45 PM Yelena Tee hee hee this is so cute. LOL sorry.
07-18-03, 03:10 AM SeattleRon kendor, that wasn't the point. it's a war of words buddy. Personally i'd rather the world settled it's disputes through wits and brains than a real life shoot'em up street war.
Rap you can do anytime, no matter how rich or poor you are. As long as you can talk you can rap. You don't need to buy an expensive instrument, or even have a singing voice.
Rap, just like country music, and the blues and all other forms of expression comes from the mind and soul.
07-20-03, 12:10 PM Yelena Okay wait, my turn.
Aye yo Leprechauns, leprechauns, they have pointy ears (ugh, yah!) Leprechauns Leprechauns They have pointy beards (thats right mafaka I said pointy beards) Leprechauns Leprechauns Theyre half my size (Like Mini Me, biatch) These Bad ass leprechauns They smoke lucky charm pies!!!(say whaaaaat?)
Aint no mistaken it, dont mess with the leprechauns or they gon bust a cap in you ass!! WHAT!!!
07-20-03, 12:10 PM Yelena Oh well, I tried.
07-29-03, 10:13 PM clarebear Yelena
That was great!
P.S. They are always trying to steal me lucky charms. Wink
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