I wrote this poem and i was wondering what you though. Thanks!
~Amaris

I Miss You
By Amaris Moon

I miss your laugh,
I miss your smile,
I miss the way we
use to talk for a while.

I miss your touch,
I miss looking into your eyes,
Sometimes thinking about you
makes me want to cry.

I miss hearing your voice,
you telling me about your dreams,
I want to tell you how I feel,
but its harder than it seems.

No matter what happens,
No matter what you see,
You'll always be in my heart,
and you'll have a piece of me.

[This message was edited by Space Cadet from Planet Monkey on 01-31-03 at 04:27 PM.]

Excellent, you should enter it in the III Answerpool Poetry Contest (starts in April).

That is an excellent poem. Good luck in the Poetry Contest!

You may also get good feedback if you post this at WordParade.com.

Amaris,
That was most excellent. I love the thought you put into it. I was feeling what you were when you wrote it!

I've been wondering how you're doing? I haven't talked to you at all since your post about depression. How is everything going with you?
If you ever need or want to talk, you can send a private message to me through AnswerPool, or use my email. It's in my profile.
It's nice to see you writing like that. Keep it up! Puppyblues

Hi pup!
Im doing ok. Im taking everyday slowly.
Thanks for everyones comments.
~Amaris