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Space Cadet from Planet Monkey

Posted I wrote this poem and i was wondering what you though. Thanks! ~Amaris I Miss You By Amaris Moon I miss your laugh, I miss your smile, I miss the way we use to talk for a while. I miss your touch, I miss looking into your eyes, Sometimes thinking about you makes me want to cry. I miss hearing your voice, you telling me about your dreams, I want to tell you how I feel, but its harder than it seems. No matter what happens, No matter what you see, You'll always be in my heart, and you'll have a piece of me. [This message was edited by Space Cadet from Planet Monkey on 01-31-03 at 04:27 PM.]

Posts: 77 | Location: Toledo, Ohio | Registered: 09-01-02

Matiqua Gold Enthusiast	Posted Hide Post Excellent, you should enter it in the III Answerpool Poetry Contest (starts in April).
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M827 Diamond Enthusiast	Posted Hide Post That is an excellent poem. Good luck in the Poetry Contest! You may also get good feedback if you post this at WordParade.com.
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puppyblues Diamond Enthusiast

Posted Hide Post Amaris, That was most excellent. I love the thought you put into it. I was feeling what you were when you wrote it! I've been wondering how you're doing? I haven't talked to you at all since your post about depression. How is everything going with you? If you ever need or want to talk, you can send a private message to me through AnswerPool, or use my email. It's in my profile. It's nice to see you writing like that. Keep it up! Puppyblues

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Space Cadet from Planet Monkey	Posted Hide Post Hi pup! Im doing ok. Im taking everyday slowly. Thanks for everyones comments. ~Amaris
	Posts: 77 | Location: Toledo, Ohio | Registered: 09-01-02

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